Evaluation
An evaluation of my work throughout tasks 1&2 Holly McNish was as massive inspiration for our second documentary, we were introduced to the poetic piece, Embarrassed (McNish 2016) , in a seminar and the style and pace stuck with the group. When we had finally decided on the poetic style of the 10-minute documentary we looked back at the way McNish had presented her ideas. We loved the simple shots of plants against bright backgrounds along with the striking fast cutting back and forth. During filming, we tried to re-create a similar style but tweak it to fit our themes, we had the broken glass filmed against a black background as well as our actress filmed against a white wall. I think that although the scenes of the actress worked well the scenes of the plain black wall often took away from the style that we were going for and can sometimes feel forced. Another thing we planned on that didn’t make it to the final film was slow motion shots, like mentioned above we had shots...